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the cry of a mother - "the lost world"


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AND I DEDICATE THIS WIN TO MY MOM AND SIS




For being born as a woman, God blessed me
With a tiny cute angel in my womb
Fulfilling the birthright of a woman
The Sweet days of motherhood bloomed
And I treasured those to the highest degree
Her sweet touches and punches are the one
Those made me fly high into the sky
The more she played
the more
she made
me happy
the more I
treasured!
intolerable
pain it was

with love, I carried her into this world
and with tears, I gifted her to God's heaven
the pain was worse as it filled my heart with
tears and it became a hobby


I requested my angel

'Oh my angel rest your wings
Stay with me for a while
I will feed you my milk
I will sing a lullaby for you
I will hold your hand for a while
And enjoy your tender smile
Why you have gone away?
Please come back to me
Please
Please'

the cry
of a mother
-
“The Lost World”


PS: My mom dedicated this poem to my lost sister. She lived in this awful world for just four days. My mom dictated this poem in Tamil and I translated it. . I have to say, ‘My Mom is a precious angel found in this earth’.


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48 comments:

  1. Beautifully written. The pain in one's heart is often worse than any physical discomfort.

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  2. Oh thats really sad .. Its really heart wrenching to know this, and I can just imagine how your mother would have gone through this , and you have highlighted that in soft words that makes us sympathise with your mother .. Touching ..

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  3. Very beautiful and touching .

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  4. a lovely little bit of concrete...sad words...that leave ache in the heart...

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  5. I know how painful it is to lose a loved one, but that suffering is probably nothing compared to the heart ache a mother goes through when she loses her precious child.

    Your translation of your mother's work beautifully captures that agony.

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  6. this is beautiful poem and i love it

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  7. Any mother having experienced this would appreciate this cry - this song for the angel who took flight

    thanks for sharing with One Shot

    take care - plz

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  8. Its very poignant and powerful. I could relate to the pain that it portrays...
    Peace.

    ॐ शांति ॐ
    Om Shanti Om
    May peace be… pray for People of Japan
    ________
    http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2011/03/whispers-love-and-insignificance.html
    Connect me at Twitter @VerseEveryDay

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  9. Very touching...Made me silent a few moments. Pain is something that gives us the courage to move on. I am happy you are blessed with such a lovely mother...i miss mine:(

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  10. What a poem, SiS!! Beautiful!! And to think that your mom actually had to go through this !! I salute her, my friend...

    This is a very moving read...

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  11. your love for your mom is evident,
    proud son, proud mother..

    does she read English?
    she must be smiling/crying over this with excitement...

    cheers.
    A++

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  12. beautiful SiS and very close to my heart!

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  13. beautiful and so sad. your mother is an amazing poet to be able to write about such a loss in such a tender way.

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  14. It's so sad that I am not able to write anything.

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  15. @ Margaret

    Smiles, the credits goes to my Mom.. and yeah it is worse..

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  16. @ adreamygal

    dreamy, my mom is the sweetest mom in this world.. I am blessed by God.. and she is the best in all..

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  17. @ Simran

    Simran, Glad it touched your heart.. Smiles and credits to my Mom..

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  18. @ Lolamouse

    SmileS.. and Happy Man..

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  19. @ Brian Miller

    Glad to see you back here.. and yeah it aches even after 25 years..

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  20. @ gautami tripathy

    Glad it toucehed your heart.. Welcome back..

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  21. @ introspeak

    true, nothing could be so much painful as this.. thanks and credits goes to my mom..

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  22. @ ACEBiggaveli

    ! Welcome to Few Miles ! Smiles and glad you loved it..

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  23. @ moondustwriter

    sure moon I will take care.. Thanks for all the smiles..

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  24. @ expression

    ! Welcome to Few Miles ! SmileS..

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  25. @ cloud nine

    Glad it touched your heart.. and Pain I know how worse it is.. OMG, you miss you mom sad..

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  26. @ Kavita

    SmileS.. and Kavi, I conveyed all your wishes and messages to your mom..

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  27. @ Jingle

    Thanks Ji, with blessings from people like you I am smiling.. Sweet of you Ji.. and she can read english.. and yeah I conveyed all your wishes..

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  28. @ Dishilicious

    Dishi, I can understand you.. Smiles..

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  29. @ haikulovesongs

    thanks haikulovesongs.. I will convey all your wishes to my mom...

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  30. @ Mohinee

    NP, just hear your heart you will be able to..

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  31. The poem was heartfelt and it got conveyed.Liked it

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  32. Seriously, why wasn't I here before. :( Awesome it was.

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  33. Heartfelt indeed!
    Very well written.. True words.. Kudos!!

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  34. @ Shinymist

    ! Welcome to Few Miles ! Glad you like the poem and happy man to have you here.. SmileS..

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  35. @ Prateek

    ! Welcome to Few Miles ! Glad you felt it and NP right from today you can be here always. SmileS...

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  36. @ Olivia

    Olivia, long time no see... hmm, happy to know that.. credits goes to my MOM..

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  37. I love the new look for your bog and also congrats on the award!

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  38. @ Dishilicious

    Thank you so much Dishi.. SmileS...

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  39. @ Raksha Bhat

    Thank you so much Raksha.. and congrats to you too..

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  40. @ Amanda Moore

    Thanks a lot Amanda, smiles, very happy man..

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  41. @ sajeevkmenon

    Glad it touched your heart.. Thanks..

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