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Tears....



She met him in a lonely place
Fell in love with him deeply

She has free boundaries
Without knowing the real fear

She never knew it is lust
As days went so fast and so him

She believed him truly
But her belief went in deception

She now think of his silky touches
Whenever cool breeze kissed her

She realised it a little late
That is a beginning of a sad story

Tears….



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48 comments:

  1. I think freedom has to follow certain norms ...or it can all end sadly :(

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  2. awesome lines...

    love the flow and sentiments...
    A++

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  3. Terrific, especially the first line, that is so important.

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  4. sad but true...
    life has tears to wipe :)

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  5. Sad piece, but a good reminder that boundries have their place in our lives. I believe it would be called "discretion."

    Nice work, SiS. Poem on ...

    Happy Potluck days ...

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  6. A sad but touching piece. Lovely!

    Dropping by from SS!
    Happy Monday :)

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  7. You've caught the journey from love to disappointment...so sad :(

    I wrote my entry a bit late, it's at http://cynthiamarstonwritingstuff.blogspot.com/

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  8. Tears....the epitome of true love:( Touching one yaar!

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  9. ahhh, Alfred Lord Tennyson ...
    "'Tis better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all." ... but it doesn't make it hurt any less ... becca

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  10. Love lost, so sad...but much can be learned through the tears, so I shall give this a happy ending in my own imagination. ;) Well done!

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  11. I love the story line of this peace and the emotion behind it. Great job!
    Here's my potluck entry: http://mysticmarleei.wordpress.com/2011/03/21/misrepresentation/

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  12. I was struck by "free boundaries" and how they led to the bottom line...
    Here's mine:
    http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2011/01/31/you-me-and-fibonacci/

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  13. that is nice.. here's mine.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/01/25/paper-scribbles/

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  14. Sad, but I had to keep reading. Well done.

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  15. The route that is much travelled...
    Sad but true...

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  16. wow this was a sad but oh so true read...well written..

    heres my link: http://mypoetrywriting.blogspot.com/2011/03/secret.html

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  17. days went so fast and so him" what a yummy line I really like this one!

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  18. Lovely poem, sad - but that's how we learn. This was straight from the heart and has a tinge of experience, maybe?

    Mine is more gritty:
    http://sharplittlepencil.wordpress.com/2011/03/23/gimme-shelter-carry-on-tuesday/

    Peace, and keep 'em coming! Amy

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  19. ARRR Yes nothing like lust and love being swirled around like napalm first thing in the morning!

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  20. @ jaerose

    Glad to know that.. Thanks & SmileS...

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  21. @ Nanka

    Of course Nanka you are right.. there should be some norms.. SmileS..

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  22. @ Jingle

    Glad to know that.. Thanks you so much Ji.. SmileS...

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  23. @ thingy

    Glad you felt it terrific. SmileS and happy to have you here..

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  24. @ bendedspoon

    you got it.. SmileS.. and of course life has tears to wipe..

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  25. @ Reggie

    SmileS.. Happy man Reggie, really.....

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  26. @ JamieDedes

    Thanks Jamie and I agree with you.. it should be in one's life.. SmileS..

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  27. @ WarmSunshine

    Glad you loved it Warm Sunshine.... Happy to have you here.

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  28. @ Cynthia M

    sad.. na... hmm sure will stop by your entry too.. SmileS..

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  29. @ cloud nine

    Glad it touched your heart and of course tears...

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  30. @ beccagivens

    You are 100% right becca.. SmileS..

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  31. @ Gloria

    SmileS Gloria and thanks for your wishes..

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  32. @ Marlee-I Mystic

    SmileS Marlee and glad you loved it.. Sure will stop by yours too..

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  33. @ Kim Nelson

    of course they are, Kim and they wil lead to... hmm..

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  34. @ fiveloaf

    Great to have you here. SmileS..

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  35. @ kshawnedgar

    Sad na.. hmmm, hope everything ends well.. Happy to have you here..

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  36. @ sam

    you got it Sam.. SmileS..

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  37. @ Chim's World of Literature

    Glad to know that Chim's and smiles to have you here..

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  38. @ The twenties girl

    Glad it touched your heart and welcome to Few Miles..

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  39. @ Amanda Moore

    Thanks Amanda, and Happy to have you here...

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  40. @ sharplittlepencil

    Glad you loved it and yeah it was based on experience but not from my side..

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  41. @ Prateek

    well said, SmileS..

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  42. @ Whitesnake

    yeah you are absolutely right.. SmileS..

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  43. She now think of his silky touches
    Whenever cool breeze kissed her



    loved these lines

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  44. @ shweta

    She now think of his silky touches
    Whenever cool breeze kissed her



    loved these lines


    Glad you loved those lines.. any specific reasons??? LOL...

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