Rhyme of a twin soul

The blue moon and the icy breeze
Treasure the sheen of love in her eyes
Kissed my twin soul with thy blaze

Never ending water, a place to amaze
A feast for the cynosure eyes
The blue moon and the icy breeze

Pleasant mood for the twin soul craze
A hint of lust in her eyes
Kissed my twin soul with thy blaze

Stars reflects on the glaze
The happy hearts twinkle in our eyes
The blue moon and the icy breeze

An unforgettable day marked on this date
The twin souls express it in eyes
Kissed my twin soul with thy blaze

I love my love with the love I rhyme
Feeding the hunger of the haunting eyes
The blue moon and the icy breeze
Kissed my twin soul with thy blaze


A villanelle, I am penning down this form of poetry for the first time. I hope it rhymes as per the form and sounds romantically. I thank Amity for the inspiration that made me to pen down this Villanelle.

The form looks like this

Refrain 1 (A1)
Line 2 (b)
Refrain 2 (A2)
Line 4 (a)
Line 5 (b)
Refrain 1 (A1)
Line 7 (a)
Line 8 (b)
Refrain 2 (A2)
Line 10 (a)
Line 11 (b)
Refrain 1 (A1)
Line 13 (a)
Line 14 (b)
Refrain 2 (A2)
Line 16 (a)
Line 17 (b)
Refrain 1 (A1)
Refrain 2 (A2)


Published as a part of

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