searching her.. in the streets of London… #7

First time here? Missed? No worry 🙂 Read PART 1, PART 2, PART 3, PART 4, PART 5 and PART 6 before reading the PART 7…!

Whether it could be the old woman?’ my heart was wishing so but that someone was…

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Why I am wandering like a cloud? Do I miss her a lot? What pushes me to search her indefinitely in the streets of London? Is she my destiny? I hope I will meet her someday but when that someday will come. Lot of questions but when will I find the answer?

Wandering lonely as a cloud,
I began my search in the road.
With hope as the weapon, I
search her, no, not my eye.
What did I reap? What did I sow?
Why my life has no glow?
Will I meet her? Never or now
Destiny or not only God know!

continues…

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I was happy to see a woman enjoying the lines in my book, ‘Dream Love’ while I was waiting for the old woman. I wait for the old woman just because we belong to a goodhearted people category and the wait is worth because at least once in two days I enjoy someone enjoying my lines.

Hi.. Do you love these lines?

I do… If you believe in true love then you have to read this book for sure’ she said, ‘I will… Because I trust love’ I said her before leaving from the park. Two weeks have gone but I am not able to meet the old woman. ‘Will my wait will be over tomorrow?’

Hello! … Young man, are you ok? Hello…’ the words kept on resonating in my mind and it made park to wait for the old woman indefinitely.

Someone touched me from the back, ‘Grandma! Finally, you are here! I am happy to see you!

Son! I am happy too! I read a book last week. It is one of the best books so far I read in my life, and particularly the lineIF FATE CAN BE REWRITTEN THEN I WOULD REWRITE HER AS MY DESTINY’ and the last paragraph, is very touching. I can feel the writer’s pain, I meant yours….

I was not sure what to say so kept silent… Did you enjoy the week?

Of course, I was happy on seeing the huge response from the readers, which is a writer’s dream.’ She was happy to see me excited so she said, You seems to be very very happy and excited. I am sure it has more reasons.

Of course I am.. and I was dying to tell you about my life.

Life?

Yeah’, after enjoying the function I went to pub and from there to my place. I slept peacefully after a long time because I was happy.

Goood… Thennn….

The next day was raining heavily which made me upset because I know I cannot meet you in the heavy rain but I waited for the rain to stop because I wanted to meet you Grandma. Suddenly Aamir shouted that someone has come to meet you. I was happy because I thought it was you but…

but….

‘but that someone was…Hassini’, as soon as I came out of my room I was surprised to see her. I wanted to hug and kiss her madly but I cannot because I am no more in her life, with tears, I said a ‘Hi

She came running towards me, hugged, kissed me and said, ‘I said a lie.’ On hearing her, my heartbeat stopped for a second, I thanked God because I know she is my destiny, I happily hugged and kissed her.

What made you to lie?

Because I promised my dad.

Promise?… then what made you to break the promise today?

My Dad wished so… After reading your book he felt what real love is?’ I was happy to hear her because I know she is my destiny, my life…

Speak not… Instead show how much you love’ she said and so I…

Wow! The happiest couple in the world 🙂 God bless you Son, I have to leave now because it may rain.’ the old woman said and left the park..

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after 7 years…
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We met the same old woman in the park. ‘Grandma do you remember me?

I do… Is she Hassini?

Yeah… she is… and this is our daughter Isha….’ I was happy to meet her so exclaimed about our life. She became happy and blessed us to live long saying, What a love story….


Author’s Message: My dear friends! I thank everyone for reading all the seven parts. It is my pleasure to have you all here and I thank you for the same.. I personally feel that I didn’t do justice to the title because I felt 5th and 6th was missing something, yes, I do skipped many dialogues, scenes which I wanted to write and the reason is I don’t want to make you people wait. 🙂 Hope it came out good.. Fingers crossed….


Image, Story & Title Copyrights – Saravana Kumar Murugan

0 Replies to “searching her.. in the streets of London… #7”

  1. I love it, Sorry missed it yesterday, was at somebody's place. It is indeed a beautiful story with all the elements. Wish you write many more in the time to come. For me, this sequel was a refreshing read after a house hunt the entire day.

    Thanks for such a lovely experience. I felt as if I was reading 'A Love Story' and living it the same time.

    Brilliant sequel!!!

  2. @ Abhisek

    Liked it but I expected a bit different style from you.I guess you wrote the end part in a hurry.Anywayz it's still a good ending,I like a happy ending. 🙂

    Thank you so much Abhi, but, I am sorry to disappoint you in that note.. Hoping to fulfil your heart next time..

    Someone is Special

  3. @ Fatima

    Nice story..weaved in a simple yet delicate manner…but some times I don't like happy endings coz many a times we don't really have them!
    But then what is fiction for ? To complete out incomplete dreams 🙂

    Take Care

    Why not Fatima? a dream to complete our incomplete dreams, I know it won't suffice but still, it is a beautiful feeling right?

    Someone is Special

  4. @ Hema Nimbekar

    Nice story….loved it….every part is well written….loved the mystery you left at the end of each part and the story too…

    If you could read in Hindi…then please visit any of my six stories(some of them are in 6 parts)…..

    Links of all my 6 stories…
    >>>
    http://nimhem.blogspot.com/p/part-1.html

    Waiting for your feedback..
    Hema

    Hema, thank you so much for visiting.. and glad to read your comment.. sure i will visit today and will read your series for sure..

    Someone is Special

  5. @ Leo

    This was a beautifully written series, though once a part confused me, I could understand it again once I re-read it and of course, you also helped ot clarify! 🙂

    I liked it a lot, all through you maintained the pace!

    Thank you so much Leo.. It means a lot to me.. Pleasure to have you here.. Happy Man..

    Someone is Special

  6. @ Saru Singhal

    I love it, Sorry missed it yesterday, was at somebody's place. It is indeed a beautiful story with all the elements. Wish you write many more in the time to come. For me, this sequel was a refreshing read after a house hunt the entire day.

    Thanks for such a lovely experience. I felt as if I was reading 'A Love Story' and living it the same time.

    Brilliant sequel!!!

    Glad you felt the sequel brilliant.. Happy Man.. Happy to have you here..

    Someone is Special

  7. @ shweta

    awesome.. loved it… and the way u have expressed urself is just awesome. 🙂 is it ur story someone is special?

    Shweta, welcome to my Blog.. I am so so so happy to have you here.. Nope it is just an imagination, a dream, and I am glad you loved it.. Happy Man..

    Someone is Special

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